remix 069 ~ just as lost
November 27th, 2005 | No Comments »images by “angelgaby” :: original post
remixed image & words by “xjaymanx”
.post-meta {list-style: none; } .post-meta-key {list-style: none; } li { list-style-type: square; text-align: left; }as he scrambled
across the pebbled shore
and scratched his stubbled chin
her aquamarine eyes
sparkled and shifted
as she witnessed the amusing scenehe hadn’t noticed
until they found their spot
along the softly flowing edge
he’d lost his keys
between here and the top
of the misty majestic ridgeso then he scoured
across the scraggly shore
like a sideways scurrying crab
while her oceanic eyes
darted and drifted
like sunlit windswept cloudshaving more fun
than uma or angelina
killing bill or raiding tombs
even more cruel
than miss piggy or gonzo
kicking kermit or chopping frogsshe’s just as lost
in her thoughts and whims
and can’t get him out of her head
her mischievous eyes
gleamed and glimmered
like the keys hidden in her hand
November 27th, 2005 at 1:11 pm
The last line made it perfect. Cute.
November 27th, 2005 at 1:39 pm
thanx! ;) … i had a little fun with the 4th section (inside jokes and references which others may not get), but i made sure to add something with “lost” (yeah, she’s a fan of that show)… haha :)))
November 27th, 2005 at 7:58 pm
Hah, “oceanic” I see it :D
November 27th, 2005 at 7:59 pm
Oops, that was me
November 27th, 2005 at 8:04 pm
well, and the word “lost” (twice) kinda gives it away LOLOL :)))
November 27th, 2005 at 8:08 pm
yeah, well that too… lol
December 2nd, 2005 at 1:03 pm
It’s interesting!:)
December 2nd, 2005 at 1:15 pm
thank you!… wow, we haven’t seen each other for a while!… but i’m busy, and i think everyone’s busy, hahaha ;) … i hope everything is going well with you ;)))
December 2nd, 2005 at 2:35 pm
I hope so too!:) I try))) and u’re in work?) it’s good!;)
January 9th, 2006 at 4:25 pm
OMG! THIS IS WONDERFUL! JUST BEAUTIFUL!…IM PRINTING IT OUT FOR MY WALL NOW!..
having more fun
than uma or angelina
killing bill or raiding tombs
even more cruel
than miss piggy or gonzo
kicking kermit or chopping frogs
I loved this it made me giggle!
Thankyou so so much for this its such lovely writing and the pics amazing! im all bouncy with happiness! xoxoxox
January 9th, 2006 at 4:30 pm
hahaha, thanx!… really really glad u like it!!! ;)))
… better late than never, i suppose? ;D
January 9th, 2006 at 4:33 pm
Yes im so sorry i didnt see it before i could have done with the cheering up a while ago! lol! but im over the moon now! :) its great to hear from you again…im so crap when it comes to lj! ha ha.
January 9th, 2006 at 4:39 pm
definitely! great to hear from ya as well! ;)
a-ha, so now you have TWO projects…
> some intriguing “xJAYMANx” icons for me by march 2006, hehe
> and perhaps a 200×40 “angelgaby” banner/button for my website [here]…
January 9th, 2006 at 4:41 pm
oooh i shall have to have a go soon for you! :)