images by “night_huntress” :: original post
remixed image & words by “xjaymanx”
an awkward sigh
and a stuttered reply
were their final steps
before his kiss goodbyean empty shudder
and an unspoken sting
were her last remnants
of their hollow flinghis flight took off
as she walked away
past the bustling crowds
into the sunlight of daya futile breath
with each new stride
not caring for love
she was always deniedbut a shadow above
caught her staring eye
a distant sparrow
hovering in the skybefore she knew it
and beheld the view
two dancing sparrows
against the bright bluesurprising herself
she dared to imagine
transporting her soul
beyond the horizona renewed wonder
and an inspired gaze
rekindled her hope
in life’s mysterious ways
omg, absolutely amazing! I love the story so much, very riveting. Def up there in my faves, but then again thinking about it I cant pick a fav bc theyre all so damn good. Geez, stop being fo freaking talented!!
hahaha, thanx! ;)) … don’t know if i can stop, hehe… but yeah, this is ALSO one of my faves!… then again, it all starts with the original photo, right??? ;D
Aww, thanks. looking at the pic, w the effect, it kind of looks like anime, just a tiny bit…
hmmm, interesting, didn’t think of the pic like that… but yeah, there’s some indescribable animated feel… hard to explain, but it’s there ;)
i like this very much jay! fab! a
nd i took the liberty of adding some chords to this and i made a song of it. i like to think that it rox. lol. humble me… ;)
i’ll post it to you if you want…
wow, i love this circle of remixing artistic ideas… sure! post it here if it’s okay, or email to me and i’ll post it here… whatever’s comfortable for you :))) … i’m sure will get a kick out of it! :D
[verse]
G
an awkward sigh
Cadd9
and a stuttered reply
G
were their final steps
Cadd9
before his kiss goodbye
G
an empty shudder
Cadd9
and an unspoken sting
G
were her last remnants
Cadd9
of their hollow fling
[bridge]
C
his flight took off
Em
as she walked away
D
past the bustling crowds
Dsus4
into the sunlight of day
C
a futile breath
Em
with each new stride
D
not caring for love
Dsus4
she was always denied
[chorus]
G
but a shadow above
D
caught her staring eye
Fmaj7
a distant sparrow
C
hovering in the sky
G
before she knew it
D
and beheld the view
Fmaj7
two dancing sparrows
C
against the bright blue
G/Dsus4/Em7/Dsus4/Em7/Dsus4
[verse]
G
surprising herself
D
she dared to imagine
G
transporting her soul
D
beyond the horizon
[bridge]
C
a renewed wonder
Em
and an inspired gaze
D
rekindled her hope
Dsus4
in life’s mysterious ways
[chorus]
G
but a shadow above
D
caught her staring eye
Fmaj7
a distant sparrow
C
hovering in the sky
G
before she knew it
D
and beheld the view
Fmaj7
two dancing sparrows
C
against the bright blue
G/Dsus4/Em7/Dsus4/Em7/Dsus4
the end :P
(now you just have to find someone to play if for you…lol)
…can’t you record an MP3 of this? hehehehe ;D
wait a sec– hmmm, my jen-shaka can transcribe this to piano! :D
fuckin’ awesome, man :D
and well, i don’t have a recorder :/
then what’s the general melody? any phrase of notes? ;)