remix 063 ~ against the bright blue

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images by “night_huntress” :: original post
remixed image & words by “xjaymanx”


against the bright blue

an awkward sigh
and a stuttered reply
were their final steps
before his kiss goodbye

an empty shudder
and an unspoken sting
were her last remnants
of their hollow fling

his flight took off
as she walked away
past the bustling crowds
into the sunlight of day

a futile breath
with each new stride
not caring for love
she was always denied

but a shadow above
caught her staring eye
a distant sparrow
hovering in the sky

before she knew it
and beheld the view
two dancing sparrows
against the bright blue

surprising herself
she dared to imagine
transporting her soul
beyond the horizon

a renewed wonder
and an inspired gaze
rekindled her hope
in life’s mysterious ways

11 thoughts on “remix 063 ~ against the bright blue”

  1. omg, absolutely amazing! I love the story so much, very riveting. Def up there in my faves, but then again thinking about it I cant pick a fav bc theyre all so damn good. Geez, stop being fo freaking talented!!

  2. hahaha, thanx! ;)) … don’t know if i can stop, hehe… but yeah, this is ALSO one of my faves!… then again, it all starts with the original photo, right??? ;D

  4. hmmm, interesting, didn’t think of the pic like that… but yeah, there’s some indescribable animated feel… hard to explain, but it’s there ;)

  5. i like this very much jay! fab! a

    nd i took the liberty of adding some chords to this and i made a song of it. i like to think that it rox. lol. humble me… ;)

    i’ll post it to you if you want…

  6. wow, i love this circle of remixing artistic ideas… sure! post it here if it’s okay, or email to me and i’ll post it here… whatever’s comfortable for you :))) … i’m sure will get a kick out of it! :D

  7. [verse]
    G
    an awkward sigh
    Cadd9
    and a stuttered reply
    G
    were their final steps
    Cadd9
    before his kiss goodbye

    G
    an empty shudder
    Cadd9
    and an unspoken sting
    G
    were her last remnants
    Cadd9
    of their hollow fling

    [bridge]

    C
    his flight took off
    Em
    as she walked away
    D
    past the bustling crowds
    Dsus4
    into the sunlight of day

    C
    a futile breath
    Em
    with each new stride
    D
    not caring for love
    Dsus4
    she was always denied

    [chorus]

    G
    but a shadow above
    D
    caught her staring eye
    Fmaj7
    a distant sparrow
    C
    hovering in the sky

    G
    before she knew it
    D
    and beheld the view
    Fmaj7
    two dancing sparrows
    C
    against the bright blue

    G/Dsus4/Em7/Dsus4/Em7/Dsus4

    [verse]

    G
    surprising herself
    D
    she dared to imagine
    G
    transporting her soul
    D
    beyond the horizon

    [bridge]

    C
    a renewed wonder
    Em
    and an inspired gaze
    D
    rekindled her hope
    Dsus4
    in life’s mysterious ways

    [chorus]

    G
    but a shadow above
    D
    caught her staring eye
    Fmaj7
    a distant sparrow
    C
    hovering in the sky

    G
    before she knew it
    D
    and beheld the view
    Fmaj7
    two dancing sparrows
    C
    against the bright blue

    G/Dsus4/Em7/Dsus4/Em7/Dsus4

    the end :P
    (now you just have to find someone to play if for you…lol)

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